Wednesday, September 23, 2009

PAINTED FACES AND LONG HAIR
rage pain and confusen
man all this is happening to fast loosening people getting in verbal fights every not listening Ralph and me are the only one that has the mind set like this island is the best place to be i have a family that worried sick about me but the people are worst then the littleuns they need to grow up jack is out hunting like always not giving a damn about getting off this island he's supposed to be a leader but its clear to every one that he's a slacker and e cant have a person with an ego that is bigger than this scar that is on this island watch because of him were gonna be here forever and the littleuns are gonna be here wanting nothing more than there parents and the only thing that leaves them hours later her they come chanting kill the pig slit her throughout spill her blood little did he know he let a boat go by cause he let the fire go out

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  1. make sure it has gewd grammer add periods its a run on and fix the spelling and make it clearer good blog it makes sense make sure you did everything the teacher asked thanks

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